Vrooom--Screech! Crash! Thud (Scream) Clopclopclopclopclop brrrring brrrring brrring
"911, what is your emergency?"
Shuffleshuffle thud. Shuffleshuffle thud. Smack!
Wamwamwamwhamwamwam. Beedledeebeedlebee. WamwamwamWHAMWAMWAMWAM?!
WeeoooWEEoooWEEOOO--chakkaaah!
Clopclopclopclop--shick! Fumble... zzzinzzzinzzin...
Arghs/Ughs
ssshhit--zzzinzzzinzzzin-clang! shick!
WEEOOOWEEoooWeeoooweeooo...
...
Check...Check...Onetwothree-onetwothreefour...
Beeeeeeeeeeep...ZAP--bah beep...bah beep...bah-beep-bah-beep-bah-beep--ssshhit!
Wamwamwamwahhh...
"Where am I?"
Wamwamwamwahwah...
"Where's my mom?"
Wamwam...Whamwamwah...
"Mom?"
"I am here, honey, don't worry."
"What happened? Where am I?"
"The test sheets show there are some bone fractures to both legs, and his left arm is broken in two places."
"Alright, Mrs. Claymore said go ahead with the operation."
"But...the risks...there is some decent brain damage and--"
"Right now, whether he dies or not is up to a being greater than me."
Shuffleshuffleshuffleclopclopclopclopclop...
Look stage left...look stage right...look up...exit left while the light dims to dark.
November 11, 2009
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"Check Check" is fun I had with sounds of things. Some of them are rather abstract, so forgive me if half of it confuses you. Why I wrote it in only onomatopoeia and dialogue is beyond me, but I had fun writing it. Maybe a useful tactic for writing a nontraditional essay.
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